“I could not believe the smell!” exclaimed Anna. She stood fixed to the ground and eyes glued to the display window. The smell made her drool and her stomach grumble. She imagined sinking her teeth into the delectable food. Like a dog with two tails, she excitedly bounded into the store. The place smelled heavenly: sweetness, spices and all things nice. Anna pulled out her pocket money that she had been scrimping for weeks. She bought a few bars of delightful dark chocolate to share with her family. Finally, she was able to pull herself away from the sweet-smelling shop.
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Good vocabulary! I love that you created a story that I could relate to and gave a descriptive picture in my mind when I read your story. Fantasic job! Now i feel like eating dark chocolate.
Thanks Jordan for the comments!!!!!!!!😊😊😃☀️. Congrats for your silver award!!!!👏👏👏👍👍😀💐🌹🎂 From Isabel
Dear Isabel: You have a talent in creating lovely stories. Very good range of vocab and a well thought out story plot. I especially like the phrase ‘like a dog with two tails’. Well done Isabel!
Dear Tze Ee,
Thanks a lot for your nice comments! Clarabel says: “Love you Tze Ee!”
Best regards,
Isabel
Good piece of writing Isabel. Excellent description of all the goodies in the shop. Keep up the good work.
Dear Mrs Witley,
Thank you for your generous words!
Best regards,
Isabel
Mrs Williams team 100 UK
Wow, what a fabulous story. So descriptive with excellent use of punctuation. You have started your sentences in a variety of ways, making it very interesting to read. Excellent work.
Dear Mrs Williams,
Thanks for your encouraging words!
Best regards,
Isabel
Hi Isabel
Long time no speak….hope everyone is happy and healthy 🙂
You have have very convincing story telling way….I can visualise your Anna’s excitement and the sweet smelling shop!
Keep up with the writing!
Take care
Godma xoxoxo
Hi Godma,
Thanks for the comments! We are well. Just busy preparing for the exams. Please come and visit us soon and stay in our room. Clara said,”Don’t forget to bring your luggage!” LOL! 😀
Love,
Isabel
Mmmmm….reading your story makes me hungry! I never knew a dog can have 2 tails! LOL
Well done Issy.
Love Daddy
Excellent 100WC, I wish I could visit this sweet shop! I love your use of high level vocabulary and correctly used punctuation to add fantastic detail. Please keep up the great work 🙂
Dear Mr O’Brien,
Thank you for your kind words!
Best regards,
Sharon
Take me to this shop, Isabel! i can imagine all the lovely smells from this shop. I love how I am able to visualise the scene as I read your writing. Excellent job, Isabel! Keep the creative juices flowing. 🙂